OUGD504: Studio Brief 01 - Design Production - Crit Feedback On Proposals

Everyone preferred the colouring book proposal and gave this feedback:

• "You could incorporate the humour side of the first concept with the second one, through captions or the illustrations itself. In the colouring book." 
• "Could be a colour app, it's good because the calming thing is massive now."
• "Vectoring, sketchy drawings, imaged traced instead of having perfect ones."
• "Could be a range of products start from New York and go to Chicago etc. The person could draw where they visit within the range of books."
• "Think of different stock for different types of media. For example: there's different types of colouring books for different medias like felt tips and colouring pencils would need different types of stock."
• "Could have inserts like post card pull outs."

Moving forward with the colouring book concept. I feel like it's a more consistent and specific idea. It has a large audience it established already and could appeal to a younger and older generation. It is something I would personally be interested in buying. I need to decide the production factors and create the illustrations from the photographs.